"She and Adam" Part I

Okay guys, I’m trying something a little different, here. I love to write fiction, but I have a horrid habit of starting stories that do not finish. I figure I can use the very few readers of this blog to motivate me to complete my work. I’ll post whatever I get done here. Then I’ll be motivated to post the next piece because you will ALL WANT to read the next section…. Right? ….. Well , it’s worth a shot.  

THESE ARE VERY ROUGH DRAFTS. I haven’t edited these pages out loud, and probably wouldn’t hand them into a creative writing workshop. Also the writing may plain suck; I haven’t been graded on my fiction in a long time! In any case, read it criticize or don’t. This A Story I’m work on called "She and Adam." Again it  is just the first seven pages. I have to keep writing

She didn’t know what she was doing. How do you write about someone like him? How do you tell the world about the injustices he suffered, and tell them how loved he was? How do you describe how horrific and fantastic it was to be a part of his life? Her undergrad degree in creative writing, that the dean of the University of Massachusetts had handed her  six and a half years earlier, hadn’t prepared her for the emotional ride an author takes when writing words that tear at their heart. She had never wanted to write about what happen. She never wanted to think about it again, and she wouldn’t have either, but her dad had asked her to try to tell Adam’s story, and her dad had never asked her for anything. So she opened up a word document with her brother’s name in the header, and did what her favorite professor always told her to do, she  started at the beginning.

Adam Joseph Miller was born on July 12, 1987, exactly three months after I turned six. The sister between us, Bailey, was three and much less happy than I was about the arrival of our new sibling. She had always been very attached to mom, and often became inconsolable after ten minutes of her unexplained absence. It had been ten hours.   I remember Aunt Diane attempting to calm with sleep in her eyes, “Go to bed now, and next time you see your mama, she’ll be holding the baby!” “You’ll be a big sister now, too!” I said, trying to help, nothing worked.  It’s surprising to me now that Bailey is the most well adjusted person in our family. When Adam’s life began to unravel, we all worried the most about her. She had a ringside seat, and a habit of blaming herself for things she couldn’t control. 

After making sure Bailey was asleep,  My aunt, who always went out of her way to make me feel like I was her favorite, told me I could sleep in her bed, in case news of the baby’s birth came in the middle of night.  It did. True to character, Adam entered the world at 2:35 AM.  Aunt Diane took us to the hospital right after breakfast. I was so excited to meet him that I demanded it. I ran straight to my dad because I knew Bailey would make a bee-line for mom and I didn’t want to get caught the cross-fire. “The biggest sister!” he half-whispered enthusiastically as he picked me up, “Mom had a little boy; you have a brother.”  He laid me next to my mom who kissed me softly on the forehead three times, like always, and I saw him. My brother!  His arms already had rings of fat around them, and his eyes were wide open. Bailey was snuggled into mom’s other shoulder, she asked to hold him first. Apparently, all the “I don’t want a new baby”, feelings from the night before had disappeared.  She sang “You are my Sunshine”, to him and then it was my turn.  I kissed `and kissed and kissed his cheeks!  Both my sister and I were both as in love with him as we’d ever been with anybody or anything.  For a year, almost every interaction I had with Bailey was fighting over him. We fought over who sat closest to him at the dinner table, which one of us got to hold him while mom vacuumed the house; we even wanted to help change his diapers. If you had told me then that, eighteen years later, Bailey would be helplessly begging me to take Adam off her hands; I would have thought you were insane. In fact, if you had told me that story a year before in happened, I would have thought you were insane. 

Just writing about his birth took her three hours. She kept pausing to wipe away tears.  She was dreading the moment when she would have to stop writing about the little brother she loved and start writing about the stranger he’d become. It seemed impossible.  She shut her laptop and walked the kitchen. She didn’t really need coffee; she was probably too awake. Her husband and daughter were asleep though, and she needed a break, something to do that required no thought—so she filled the coffee pot with water and emptied it into the machine. She poured coffee granules into the filter and pushed the red button. She didn’t however stop thinking. She was suddenly livid. The brother she knew had left her a long time ago, and she wondered if his ghost deserved this. Dad refused to admit it, but Adam had shamed the family—wrecked their name. He had devastated lives, he had ended one. He broke her heart, Bailey’s heart. Marcus wasn’t a good guy, but he was some mother’s son.  No mother deserves the pain of burying their baby. No matter how much he hurt her sister, Marcus didn’t deserve to die. She smacked the counter in anger, and then she sat down.   For the first time all night she was not consumed with Adam, she was thinking about Maria. Her four year old daughter had never met Adam and of course, she wouldn’t. This idea made quietly sob for a while, but then, oddly, it motivated her.   Maria would undoubtedly read about what happened one day, and if she only read the words of writers who didn’t know her uncle, it would be very easy for her to believe that she was related to a monster. That couldn’t happen. She tippy-toed down the hallway into her baby’s room and kissed her on the forehead three times.  “For you, little girl, for you and for dad.” She accidently whispered. She was sad, frightened and she felt sick, but she didn’t need a third reason to tell Adam’s story.

I hate it, but over the years Adam and Bailey grew closer to one another than either one of them was to me.  This was partly because of personality.  They were both warmer than I am. I was driven; I didn’t have time to be warm. They confided in each other because they knew I’d scoff and tell them to get over it. I constantly encouraged them to push on, the way I had. When I was eleven, Bailey was badly bullied by another girl. She kicked Bailey and called her hideous while a couple of other kids watched. I remember that word, because after school, Bailey asked me, “Do you think I’m hideous?” I said, “Mom and dad hate when people fish for compliments. Tomorrow nobody will call you anything.”   Adam told her she was beautiful. He told her that Melanie was jealous of her pretty red hair. I was telling the truth, Mom and Dad had always preached that being self-deprecating was self-serving.  He told the more important truth. Bailey was beautiful. At five and eight, Adam and Bailey already knew something it took me a marriage and a pregnancy to learn. Most of the time people fish for compliments because they need them, and sometimes they deserve them. I’ll never understand why some people are just born with huge amounts of compassion, and why some of us have to work so hard at it. I’m not a cold person.  I guess, I wasn’t born with the gift of knowing what to say, so I try not to say anything.

She highlighted and deleted the sentence, “I write my emotions down, and throw them away.”  Whoever was publishing this wouldn’t care about the way her mind worked; she didn’t kill anybody.

My brother and sister became even closer when Mom was diagnosed with stage -three Breast Cancer. I at  the tale-end of my freshmen year of college, and decided after spending four days at home with my sick mother, that I needed to take summer classes. I couldn’t face what might happen to our family, so Adam and Bailey faced it together. It was only in the wake of Marcus’s murder that my dad told me how much how hard my siblings had it. I inherited my refusal to handle heartache from my dad. He shut down. He restored  cars for hours after working the overtime he’d requested, and then he came inside, sat on the couch, watched re-runs of ‘60’s sitcoms, and drank a little beer.  Adam drove Mom to her chemo treatments and Bailey held her hair back while she vomited the medicine that was supposed to be healing her.   Our Mom fought bravely for two years, and then one night my dad called me and told me to drive home. When I got there Bailey was feeding her ice-chips and Adam was doing his best to make her laugh.

They saw her through cancer and at the end, when we all knew mom couldn’t hang on anymore, it was Adam who held her hand, and gave her our permission to leave us. Bailey hugged him and kissed her; she thanked our mother. I leaned down let my mom kiss my forehead three times and made an inadequate excuse to leave the room.  Mom died at one twenty-three in the morning on August 30, 2002. Adam was barely fifteen. He was never okay again. I thought for a long time, that our entire family would never be okay again. Contrary to what most people tell you though, a family can be okay without being whole.

Where did she go next? Bailey meeting Marcus? To the day she realized her brother was capable of evil? Did she want Maria to hear that story? Too many questions swirled around her; she couldn’t write anymore tonight.  She climbed into bed and pulled Nick’s arm over her.  Normally, she liked to sleep with plenty of space between her and her husband, but tonight she needed to feel him. His presence had calmed her down and warmed her up since they met at twenty.  She felt so fortunate when he pulled her in a little tighter. He knew she needed him.  At three o’clock that morning she fell asleep not wondering why mental illness happened to people as wonderful as Adam.  Instead she was wondering why some women meet men like Nick so young, and others , ones as wonderful as her little sister, have to meet men like Marcus.

When she woke up the next morning she had a text message from Chrissie asking her what day would be best to meet for lunch. Chrissie was where she’d go next.

One of my best friends from college lost her mother in a car accident when she was thirteen. She was in the back seat of a mini-van when a semi-truck’s force threw her mom through the windshield, killing her almost instantly. Firemen had to pull Chrissie from the wreckage. She has two jagged, long, white scars on her tan, shapely legs that serve permanent reminders of the day her mom passed away. Her father offered to pay for a treatment that would make them less noticeable, but Chrissie told him to save his money. She said one night, after three daiquiris that the scars were the last things she and her mom got together, and that she was afraid that if they faded, her memory might fade a bit along with them. Of course, after three drinks, it didn’t come out quite like that.

Chrissie graduated as valedictorian of UMass nursing school and went on to become a nurse practitioner. She moved to Manhattan and is engaged to a man who could be an underwear model but chooses to work as a civil engineer instead. She is by far my most successful friend, and one of my happiest, too.

Chrissie’s life was much more traumatic my little brother’s. Don’t get me wrong, sometimes I knew it got to her. The day she graduated, I found her crying in the fetal position in the backseat of her car. The seemingly endless string of boys she took home until she met her fiancé had to be filling of some kind of void but Chrissie moved on. After all that, she persevered.  

Adam had time to prepare for mom’s death. We all had the luxury for which Chrissie spent years longing, a chance to say goodbye.  For years, I was so angry Adam—and sometimes I still am. It didn’t make sense that our mother’s losing her battle with cancer could be the beginning of his end while Chrissie did so well. She had better reason to be mad at the world.   

Now, I understand something that makes me angry with myself. When Adam lost mom, he lost the only person who recognized that he felt differently than most… the only person who saw that he was ill. He hid it from the rest of flawlessly and he wanted to be discovered.

She took out her phone told Chrissie Tuesday worked, and added an uncharacteristic “I’m so excited to see you!! XXOO” to her text.  She was always glad to get together with Chrissie, but today she felt like Chrissie just might need to know it.  Maybe, she thought, there is a tiny piece of every kid who had to grow up to fast—happy or not, that wants to be discovered.

My family went to several doctors in the wake of what my father will probably always refer to as “that day”; we wanted to understand Adam. The problem was, Adam didn’t fit into any boxes. He was “overly cautious” but not quite paranoid. He had signs of mania, but they would not call him manic.  He lied a lot but they weren’t sure if it was pathological or deliberate. He had psychotic episodes—“moments when he lost with touch with reality” but seemed “generally aware of his surroundings of his actions.” According to the shrinks, Adam had a personality disorder, NDS: Not Otherwise Diagnosed. How the hell were we supposed to handle to understand that? It’s not shocking that Adam couldn’t understand himself.